Wearing uniforms is popular in schools, but some people argue that it might cause damage to children's individuality. What is your opinion?
There is no deny that kids go to school to learn and get education. Uniforms are integral part of the school culture, some folks tends to disagree with norms of common dress for everyone as it does not help kid to distinguish them out as an individual in crowd. In my view point, it is good to have a uniform and in this essay I will explain why it is necessary.
To begin with, children from various social economic group come to school to enhance their knowledge and having a standard dress code brings everyone at same level. For instance, an American kid from some specific ethnic race will have different set of standards and apparel in comparison to Brazilian kid. Both of the kids are of same age and class but because of dress code the difference in their origin and family background disappears. On the contrary, if all are given a choice to wear dress as they please it can affect the mind of child since they will see from an early age that class difference does exist in our society.
Secondly, having a proper uniform teaches children to be more disciplined and bring more structured in their life. Kids also learn to see and understand an individual for who they are rather on how they appearance. In addition to that, it would not be possible for parents of low-income group to buy expensive clothes for their kids when they are going to school.Therefore, having a standard dress suits multiple purposes.
In conclusion the primary objective of school is to give education and knowledge and wearing uniform is a good way to bring that structure and discipline required to prepare them for life and in no way it dampens the individuality of a children.
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... no way it dampens the individuality of a children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66216216216 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64933802391 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8513450498 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690526111154 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291759533049 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273752870626 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507962567442 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198452336978 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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