Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
There is no deny that regular exercise is essential in maintaining healthy body. The problem of not having physical movement is quite prominent among most of the work individuals. In this essay we will look at few of these problem and provide solutions to tackle those issues.
To begin with, in modern times life have been become very busy and complicated. Nowadays, young people live a sedentary lifestyle and spend majority of their time doing desk jobs and walking less. In addition to that quite few of them are also parent so they have added responsibilities of home and family. As a result, personal health and well-being often gets neglected. To tackle this issue, organisations should have fitness center at the office premises. This should result in people spending some time working out in gym or playing some form of sports from their busy schedules to take care of their health.
Another problem that people neglect their health is because of laziness. Many folks tend to spend their leisure time watching television, browsing the internet and not do any physical labor to burn up the calories. Furthermore, they intend to take rest on weekends or whenever they have free time. This problem could be mitigated by doing physical activities with a person or family member or a group which will act as a support system and will motivate each other to go to gym or do task such as running or cycling. This will help them prevent by not having health issues such as obesity and its concomitant diabetes.
In conclusion, busy schedules and an individual lack of initiative are two major concerns for working professionals to neglect their health. However, this problems can be managed via fitness facilities at company location and the use of support groups to keep one in check.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94719471947 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60501218996 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9160256356 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347164839555 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971582176313 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492713347843 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186714528492 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301227607973 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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