Wedding are bigger and more expensive in many others at present than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?
These days people are spending huge amount of money on marriage occassions in almost all the part of the world. There are numerous factors for this expenditure. While people may have valid reasons for putting money lavisly, but I assert that this trend has detrimental effects on both individuals and society.
Pitching into the first are of discussion, the predominant reason for this expenditure is show off to the society, nowadays people wants to maintain their social status and display their financial status among the society. For example the trend of opting destination wedding is becoming popular among youth. They take their friend and relatives to the specific location for celebrating their special day. The choice of destination display their marriage budget and catches people's attention. Apart from this, youngsters want to have the memory of their weeding day and the best way to capture moments have the video and pictures of the marriage day, which force them to spend lavisly on this. Because of this social and emotional reason people become extravagent while planning their marriage budget.
However, this trend of putting excess money on wedding is not at all a wise option. People has to think about their future and try to nest their money for the future need. They can save the money and use it in much better way like providing education and quality life to their childrens. Marriage is all about love and harmony among the partner. Spending more money will not going to help them to have a better life. Moreover, many people are not economically sound enough to spend on this single day function. Many times they feel neglected from the community and leading to lack of social life for them. Therefore, this trend is having adverse effects on both people and community.
In conclusion, unequivocally nowadays spending on marriages are becoming increasingly popular than the previous years, but it is not all beneficial in any way and much better to save money for further use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...e partner. Spending more money will not going to help them to have a better life. Mor...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h better to save money for further use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05105105105 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48295871954 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2953119249 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0834530067847 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334424587973 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330336482173 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522562389301 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249782671481 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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