What are the advantages and disadvantages of living abroad
In present time young generation of eastern world specifically youth of Asia are dreaming to settle in the western world like Europe and America. There is no doubt about fact that the western world is having its spark at peak this part of the world is in the limelight,the development that is taking place across Atlantic Ocean is mouth watering for every one, the modernization rekindles the people living in underdeveloped countries to experience its taste as well.
There are plethora of advantages to get settle in abroad specifically in western world some of key advantages which Masmerise people are comfort, money, economy, rapid growth in career, getting an insight to another culture and getting oneself expose to new technologies are in the list.
On the basis of ranking money and economy always come first.The life of a person is centipetal to money. If money is less in magnitude the force and spark in life is also less and vice versa. So in short money is directly proportional to quality of human life. That is the pivotal reason due to which young people are urging to live abroad because they can earn double in magnitude in short span of time and improve their lifestyle even futher.
Comfort and reliability are other factors that you can't afford to miss. Comfort is hand in hand with economical structure. If a person earns more his comfort gets more cozy and he can surely make a rapid transition from discomfort to comfort and to lavishness as well. One can have good hospital facilities, good nutrition to have and last but not the least better or even better transport facilities for locomotion.
In addition to that some points of living abroad tilt towards person's career either in education or in profession. People who get a chance to visit abroad can have better oppurtunity to get a booster tonic in their specific field. The growth in career is always swift by the agency of new and modern technologies due to immense investment in research and development section. Moreover to that a person can get an oppurtunity to experience an insight to cultural diversity and adaptability which play key role in grooming of a person.
We have talked lto about one side of the coin but every coin has its tail as well, there is another side of a book also some cribs are there while living abroad. The first and the farms one is loneliness so one should know the tactics to catter this darker sided ring coarse of stay. There are many other pasamistic factors including a label of minority which always remains with a person as a tag. The other one is language barrier and contrasting culture to live with.
I recapitulate my arguments by saying that perks and priks are everywhere but one should always look for the positivity it is a renowned saying that no pains no gains so if you are receiving rewards in large extent then there should no issue in conceiling with some factors too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, in addition, in short, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 41.998997996 174% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 506.0 315.596192385 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60833031338 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 506.74238477 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7458589887 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114475230007 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033403369373 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05033375555 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054386292458 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437768068337 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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