What are the advantages and disadvantages of living abroad.

Essay topics:

What are the advantages and disadvantages of living abroad.

In today's era young generation is dreaming to get settle in abroad due to the fact that the western world is in the limelight,development taking place in this part of world rekindles the nation of third world countries.

There are plethora of advantages to get settle in abroad some of them are comfort, money, fast career pathways and experiencing modern technologies. On the basis of ranking money comes first money is in direct proportion to lifestyle. Comfort is another positive aspect of living abroad that you can't afford to miss. It is hand in hand with economical structure one can easily turns his discomfort to comfort by living abroad.

In addition to that one can have better oppurtunity to get booster tonic in their field of studies moreover to that a person can get an oppurtunity to experience an insight to the cultural diversity and adaptability which play a key role in grooming of a person. A person can also enjoy good hospital facilities, healthy nutrition to eat and comfortable transportation facilities.

We have talked about one side of coin there is a tail also. Some disadvantages are there while living abroad. The first and farmost.one is loneliness so one should know the strategy to cope up with it, secondly it also includes a label of minority as a tag and language barrier as well as contrasting culture.

I recapitulate by saying that buts and ifs are always there but one should look into positivity especially and if one get a chance to visit abroad then he should avail the oppurtunity even by conceiling with some hard facts.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , development
...at the western world is in the limelight,development taking place in this part of world reki...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...sitive aspect of living abroad that you cant afford to miss. It is hand in hand with...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...afford to miss. It is hand in hand with economical structure one can easily turns his disc...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'turn'
Suggestion: turn
...ith economical structure one can easily turns his discomfort to comfort by living ab...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n easily turns his discomfort to comfort by living abroad. In addition to that...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... about one side of coin there is a tail also. Some disadvantages are there while liv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, while, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89179104478 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96587810727 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3805476506 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.181818182 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176575319534 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865949811395 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124752531272 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083627932411 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728878052684 0.056905535591 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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