what are the causes of the crime rate among youth and suggest some possible solutions.
The crime rate among youth is indeed increasing at an alarming rate in many countries worldwide. This essay will look at the causes of this problem and suggest some possible solutions to combat levels of youth crime.
The main reason behind the rise in youth offense is that parents are unable to nurture their kids well as they are too busy with their job and have no time to talk to their children. As a result, with time they will indulge themselves in evil activities such as gambling and kidnapping, showing parents are unaware of the company their kids are keeping outside the home. Another reason is the rise in unemployment in youth, meaning they have high qualifications but are still jobless. For example, a city in Pakistan, Karachi, and pickpocketing and snatching expensive things over gunpoint has become so common and to fulfill the basic needs such as to own a house or start a family, youngsters have no choice but to earn by illegal means.
There are some possible solutions associated with the rampant increase in youth crime. First and foremost, parents should spare some time after work to acknowledge their children about manners. In other words, the parent must guide them. This will encourage them to give more time to studies instead of harming others. Secondly, it is the government’s responsibility to create a job market for new graduates every year. For instance, by affiliating youth with a company for a year so that they can gain experience to start their career as well as providing small grants to start any business. In this way, parents and government could collectively safeguard the rights of youth.
In conclusion, the factors responsible for youth crime are unemployment and parent’s negligence, however, these issues can be minimized if the government creates jobs for masses and parents monitor their children from an early age.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06709265176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75286664413 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584664536741 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3488159937 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204008672607 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785042069942 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105489805668 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153996408963 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150765011046 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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