Whoever controls the media also controls the opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Write at least 250 words.
In the recent past, there has been a considerable increase in flow of information through various communication channels. However, there are some people who are of the opinion that individuals behind media not only influence but also alter peoples beliefs and behaviors on any given subject and not much can be done to correct it afterwards. This essay completely agrees with this deduction and will discuss in detail how strong this influence is in changing people's perception.
To start with, it is a known fact that people are social beings and are influenced with what they see and hear. Broadcasting channel therefore, plays a very important role in shaping this perception within the society. For example, during elections, the polling information relayed about the winning and loosing party, of a particular area, psychologically manipulates other voters as well. The indecisive nature of humans make them easy targets to such manipulators. The process is subtle, but the result has lasting impact.
In addition to the above, media also influences peoples mannerisms with respect to how they treat each other. Any news item or information is enough to extract an aggressive reaction without applying thought behind their actions. An example to this would be a recent case of harassment which was publicized by a celebrity and got a lot of media attention while in reality, it was all a farce , due to incorrect portrayal of the incident. Since the focus is on increasing the TRP's, the media tycoons play with people's minds and emotions to achieve their goals.
To sum up, the essay strongly agrees that media tycoons control people's belief and influence their behavior to suit their requirement of making money including influencing voters with broadcasting polling information and sensationalizing incidents without finding conclusive evidence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion while in reality, it was all a farce , due to incorrect portrayal of the incid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, to start with, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32993197279 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89728399101 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4640829373 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.538461538 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140478763963 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443584155238 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447440545352 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868997305006 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401669168789 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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