Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Children are the tender buds of our society, so we must choose curriculum for them carefully. Many people believe that social works must be incorporated in high school education such as helping youngers, participating in charity work. Undoubtedly, I do accord with this notion, as it helps children in many ways, and I will explain in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, every course included in education institute has immense importance in pupil’s life. For instance, science subjects help students to develop their analytical skills, which will be beneficial in their career. Similarly, if community works are included in their syllabus, it would definitely help them in many ways. For instance, teaching younger in any field of their interest, say cricket, will help student to develop their coaching skill that may be crucial in managing projects, because team members of a project regularly need guidance. Furthermore, encouraging youth to participate in charity works like tree plantation will make them aware about the importance of trees in our society. As we all know the scarcity of trees and impact on environment because of deforestation, it would be a good idea if we can make aware our juveniles about the importance of plants, then definitely we can expect a better future.
However, charity works should be free or paid jobs for children is a debatable question. I do believe that there is no harm if we pay anything in the form of gifts or awards for charity work, it would certainly motivate young to participate more in the future. Don’t we adult feel happy if we receive benefits for our works? So, why can’t we give reward to a student for his noble work?
To recapitulate, including social works in high school are beneficial for the society to produce a better citizen. However, students must receive some sort of rewards, not necessarily money, to value their efforts.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, for instance, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8401718194 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7272808081 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197794531743 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749637197021 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539421883683 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130143616877 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326832893348 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.