Write a letter to the organiser of an annual festival that you attended last year. Include
- Feedback about last year
- An offer to volunteer
- Questions about the festival
Dear Mr Brown,
I am writing to express my gratitude to your organisation of Octoberfest last year. I have received a great pleasure attending it. Especially, I was thrilled by the opportunity to cook fried meat on my own using the grills that you provided free of charge for participants. Even though I am into beer myself, such a wide variety of craft beer was great and my husband enjoyed it a lot. Personally, I have tasted a cherry beer first time and was pleasantly surprised.
By the way, I would like to help you with the conduction of Octoberfest as I noticed that there were not enough waiters during the celebration. I guess everyone just wanted to chill out and take a rest. That is why I think that an extra pair of hands will be useful and I will be glad to suggest my free help in the Fest.
Frankly speaking, we liked the festival so much that we are planning to visit it next year. Could you please be so kind to give me some information about it? When and what location will the October west be conducted? Will it possible to stay in the camp like the previous year? Should we bring our own costumes or will they be available for the rent at the festival?
Thank you in advance for your kind attention to this matter.
Sincerely yours,
Maria V
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, so, i guess, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44255319149 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55275173518 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4752976918 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160531760004 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044085622635 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490510456335 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738827251858 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397754546035 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, so, i guess, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44255319149 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55275173518 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4752976918 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160531760004 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044085622635 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490510456335 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738827251858 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397754546035 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.