You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
It has become quite common these days to see products being shipped off and imported from distant places. Although some people argue that consuming locally grown food would be more beneficial than importing them, there are several benefits of consuming a variety of food items apart from local food. This essay will delve into the pros and cons of the notion before finally giving a personal opinion.
To begin with, there are certainly numerous advantages of eating foods brought from off shore. People will find more variations of food items, such as vegetables, which will motivate them to eat better and healthier. Some foods may have more nutrition value than locally grown food which will further enhance their strength.
However, foods grown locally have their share of benefits as well. They are less expensive compared to the food that are shipped from distant land, as they are grown within the area and does not require transportation cost or taxes. Furthermore, the food are more organic and do not contain any preservatives or chemicals to increase their shelf life but with strict policies in place the amount of chemicals can be reduced to a minimum. While these advantages are noteworthy, people will easily get side tracked from these as there is a limited variation in the food that is consumed.
To conclude, although foods shipped from far are expensive and may contain certain amount of chemical, they still inspire people to add new items to their diet due to their variations that is not available in locally grown foods. Hence, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...s of the notion before finally giving a personal opinion. To begin with, there are certainly nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, well, while, apart from, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47085862251 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8629949244 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270770784981 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106260720754 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478717006194 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177814331718 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228696371947 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.