You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Parenting style holds enormous importance in an infant’s growth which decides how they grow up. Some believe that providing academic education on parenthood to the young generation can be useful for them to be better parents. In my view, it is necessary to educate adults in their young age so they can learn better parenting styles and I will be explaining my views in next paragraphs.
To begin with, wise people have suggested to include upbringing of children shall be added as curriculum subject for teenagers. This will help them to learn methods and ways to communicate which can be implemented during growth of their offspring. Study suggests that, children are mostly like to take up speaking and listening at very early stage where their ability to develop these skills solely depends on parenthood approach. For instance, babies speak in exaggerated manner and pronounce words in particular manner. With greater research and more emphasised training this can be learnt through classroom training so that parents can communicate with their infants in their early age.
Furthermore, young pupils can be taught about parenting styles and behavioural understanding to help them learn the way children react when they are young. Various pat experiences and demonstrative stimulation will enhance knowledge about child’s behaviour in various situations. As a parent, it can be inculcating sense of responsibility in the teenagers and introduce better ways to control child’s reaction into any situation. A research conducted on Oxford university recently suggest that, if parents are taught to inject sensible behaviour methods their offspring’s are cultivated in mannered behaviour towards society.
To sum up, Schools can play a vital role in children’s upbringing by developing education system which emphasis on parenting styles. Creating awareness about parenthood can not only raise sense of responsibility but also support them to cultivate bright children in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 310, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ts in their young age so they can learn better parenting styles and I will be explaini...
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Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested including'.
Suggestion: suggested including
...raphs. To begin with, wise people have suggested to include upbringing of children shall be added a...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'offsprings'.
Suggestion: offsprings
...inject sensible behaviour methods their offspring’s are cultivated in mannered behaviour to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, for instance, in particular, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51140065147 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94282323567 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0619500167 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 120.857142857 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166323800517 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618366830214 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038796292152 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100282991193 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298374080321 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.