Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past.
Causes and solutions?
It is argued that, nowadays, the youth generation seems less mannered than in the past. A drastic change has been noticed in the behavior of many youngsters in terms of respect and courtesy. The main reasons behind such negative development are the bad company most of the young ones have and rise in frustration levels of some due to the burden of studies, mistreatment, isolation, unemployment, et cetera. There are numerous solutions available to overcome this burgeoning problem both at governmental as well as an individual level which we are going to discuss in the following paragraphs.
To embark with, Undoubtedly, one of the prime reasons behind such disrespectful and impolite attitude towards modern youth is being a part of a bad company. It can be defined as a bunch of people who are not morally good and any individual being part of it tends to lose all social and religious values taught to them by their parents, respectively. For instance, Nowadays, many incidents reported finding boys of decent families involved and it has been noticed that the guardians of these few persons blame mostly towards their bad company. However, government intervention is a must in such cases and strict laws can be made to tackle such negative growth in many ways like increasing fines for traffic violations, strict punishment for eve-teasing and many more.
Another possible cause for this dismissive growth among modern youth is depression or dissatisfaction because of several reasons. One of them is unemployment which can be considered as major cause of such rudeness among various youngsters. Earlier such factors never used to bother them as it was quite easier to earn living in the past. But, in today’s world, a Highly competitive environment throughout the globe is making difficult for many to fetch good jobs or any job. The prime solution is in the hands of both governments as well as persons affected because of this. Public Administration should come forward to introduce more employment opportunities by setting up some youth quota in their own public offices and on the other hand, a youth of any nation must learn to focus and possess the strength to overcome situations of distress and failure and must learn to move on.
In conclusion, I believe that there is no problem in the world that has no solution. A good portion of youth is becoming inconsiderate and rough due to the bad company of friends and stress of unemployment as well as isolation for some. Governments play a significant role in tackling this and there are many solutions available with such blemished youngsters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
...burgeoning problem both at governmental as well as an individual level which we are going ...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ion is in the hands of both governments as well as persons affected because of this. Publi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05529953917 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90634022111 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4033818995 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.058823529 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5294117647 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143235565623 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425000950514 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413470086637 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759889687869 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360755235847 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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