Education has a significant effect on our live. It often determines our level of success. Everyone realizes that improving our skills and abilities is a great way to ensure more prosperous life. Some people believe that preschool education is one of the most effective way to improve our education and abilities. Others disagree. I believe that hiring more teachers is more advantageous and beneficial to the students. I feel this way for two important reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, the most prominent point to be mentioned is that more teachers in a small class can help the students to stay more focused and avoid distractions. As they keep focused, their skills will be improved which make them successful and responsible people in the future. It can boost their comprehension and convenient understanding of the complex subjects. My personal example is a compelling illustration of this. When I was at high school, I took a chemistry class that changed the way I was thinking about the world. My teacher asked me and my friends to make a presentation which demanded a lot of research. We gathered many information, however, the teacher was busy because there was a shortage of teachers in the school which affect our creativity and intellectual abilities. I knew that teachers always maintain a stimulating professional environment.As you can see, more teacher will improve the way of our education.
The second rationale behind me ideas is rooted in the fact that teachers help the students to brainstorm novel ideas. Teachers always encourage the students to interact with people in the classroom, which affect their social skills as they can figure out how to behave with people with different attitudes, perspectives, and consideration. If you are exposed to people with different ethnics, you will make unbelievable breakthrough. Therefore, it will make them excel in their future careers. I have to admit my opinion in this matter is profoundly influenced by my sister's example. While she was studying at a faculty of art, she was introverted. She always suffer from getting new ideas and make friends. As a result, her teacher helped her to network with people and find new ways to get more information. If she did not deal with her teacher, she would not be thriving like she is today as the facts abd experiences that people learn a decade ago are quickly becoming more obsolete. This experience taught me that by increasing the number of teachers, the education will improve.
Thirdly, By exposing to many teachers, makes it easier to gain more knowledge and information.Since the knowledge is the sum of all theoretical facts and experiences a human being collects during his whole life. Gaining more knowledge will increase our comprehension and help people to be more successful on their future career which will relieve any stress because people without jobs will feel directionless. My own experience is a good evidence of this. When I was young, I learned a lot from my teachers since they were more knowledgeable. They taught me a lot and helped me to improve the way I was thinking. As I was child, I absorb the information like a sponge and there was no technological applications that help you to store data, therefore my teacher encouraged me to do my best in my field.
In conclusion, I believe that increasing the number of teacher in a small class will have a a great effect on our education. This is because it helps the students to be more focused, brainstorm novel ideas, and because it make it easier to gain more knowledge. Everyone should recognize the effectiveness of education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'class'?
Suggestion: class
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
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Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'suffers'.
Suggestion: suffers
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Suggestion: Since
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 88.0 43.0788530466 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3053.0 1977.66487455 154% => OK
No of words: 613.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98042414356 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97582523872 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98356592871 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450244698206 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 949.5 618.680645161 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 9.59856630824 250% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1065106667 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5151515152 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5757575758 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247931040129 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656502554828 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655416839394 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163688979588 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568447583443 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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