In my opinion education is one of the most important things in our lives. There is not much a person can achieve in his life without slowly learning information and trying to set your goals from an early age. High schools are really vital in spreading education among children and helping children in setting their goals.
To be honest I would be delighted if a new high school gets built near my community, because I am sure that it would be benefitial for us in many ways.
First of all building a new high school would massively help students in my community. Some Students in my community feel uncomfortable traveling considerable distances to get to their schools. Most of the Parents in my area wanted to choose nearby schools for their kids, but the problem is that there is close to no space left in existing nearby schools. By building a new school students would not have to cover long distances every morning just to get to the school. Furthermore, students would have more free time to spend e.g with their school friends. They would not need to worry about being at home in time because their houses would be nearby. This would make daily life for students and parents way easier.
Another advantage of building a new high school is that it would help out people who are searching for a job. There are no more vacant places in existing schools near my community.Building a new school would require hiring staff: Teachers, workers in cafeteria, guards etc. There are a few qualified people for certain jobs and they would be happy to sign up. As a result this would drastically decrease unemployment, which is considered as a main problem in my community.
To sum up, I strongly support building a new high schol near my commnity as it would be beneficial not only for students, but for parents and unemployed people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73291925466 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62322190445 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3926743047 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160465843824 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603066527726 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440596744982 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105691203188 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355150230359 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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