Mahatma Gandhi quoted that there are enough resources to satisfy the needs of all human beings but not to satisfy even a single person's greed. The first thing we must all note is that we are a product of biological evolution which took billions of years and every living entity on this planet has an equal right on it's home. It is indeed true that the basic necessities for human beings must be catered to, but not at the cost of destroying our environment and it is important to save the land for endangered species.
Endangered species such as Tigers, Lions, and other carnivores keep a check on the population of various herbivores which is essential to maintain a healthy plant population within the forests. Over millions of years of evolution, plants have grown to develop a symbiotic relationship with various animal species to proliferate. The presence of various such species is dependent on other species in their ecosystem. If these animal species go extinct, we are at great risk of losing a large number of plant species. Considering the huge potential of plant-based medicine and the large numbers of plant species that are yet to be discovered and studied, it is in our benefit to keep this relationship sustained.
Over the past few decades, innovations in the field of biotechnology and genetics have brought in a variety of seeds which are tolerant to pests and can grow with limited water supply. People in the Netherlands and Japan have developed farming techniques which doesn't require soil. Looking at this trend, the need for large pieces of agricultural land and large scale irrigation project which often threaten wildlife and forest regions may go out of fashion. Industries which are the backbone of an economy are going through large scale automation and they require minimal human intervention meaning, they can be setup in places previously considered inhabitable without the need to clear forests. Effective policies can be useful in building sustainable housing.
The ecological balance which is essential for our existence cannot be tampered and there are solutions to address the issues mentioned in the paragraph without harming our environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...beings but not to satisfy even a single persons greed. The first thing we must all note...
Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
...n its home. It is indeed true that the basic necessities for human beings must be catered to, bu...
Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...have developed farming techniques which doesnt require soil. Looking at this trend, th...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 279.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08243727599 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69886047133 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9948997399 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.8 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130759780157 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495816036 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450032113928 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802639284428 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430282002078 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.