Some people agree that the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns and others do not. While I agree that money is an important aspect of a job, I believe that there are other aspects of a job that are equally important.
First and foremost, working condition and job satisfaction are two of the most important aspects of a job. On the one hand, science has proven that working condition can greatly affect people productivity. A positive, collaborative, creative work environment is what retains people in the long run, and motivates them to work harder. On the other hand, job satisfaction is a very crucial aspect that should be considered, otherwise after a while people will most likely get sick of the job despite the large incomes.
Next, experience is also one of the most essential aspects of a job. Statistics show that people at a young age more likely to be successful if they have work experience. People can develop new skills like team-working or problem-solving by working in an industrial environment. Improving knowledge helps our personal growth at work. And many companies prefer to hire employees with work experience.
Last but not least, communication in workplace is an essential tool in achieving productivity and maintaining strong working relationships at all levels in a job. People satisfaction depends a lot on their having a voice and being listening to. In fact, poor communication will inevitably lead to the encouragement of people and make them feel unconfident about their abilities.
In conclusion, I don’t think there is a “most important” aspect of a job. We should balance between aspects of a job in order to maximize productivity and improve overall experience of a job. Learning new things, gaining experience, job satisfaction, working condition all are very important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16556291391 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16845894018 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3638484288 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7647058824 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191002977232 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773785358721 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915013422557 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130884611091 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10666885621 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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