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People have many facilities to endure the life’s difficulties. Many people have different opinions either our lives more easier than it was or the opposite!. In my opinion, I agree that people lives more soothing that in past because we have not only transportations, but it we have also technology which support people in their lives.
To begin with, because of the transportations people lives, now, are easier than in the past. In other words, when people want to travel or move from one place to another, it will be easy because we have the transportations such as planes and cars. For example, when I was a student in collage, which was in another city, I used to drive my own car for transport from my home to my collage. Because of my car, I was arriving on time. Instead of that, if I had not a car, I would not arrive on the time and I will be late which will affect on my study. At the end, I think transportations make people lives more comfortable than past.
Additionally, recently, electronic devices have been invented which create person’s life more convenient. In fact, computers and internet help us to connect with others around the world in seconds. For instance, during the pandamic COVID-19 my friend from Egypt, she was a student in USA, she enforced to back to her country. Because of technology, she can complete her education from her place by using Zoom, which is an application on computer. Consequently, our lives are easier than in past because we have a great technology.
To conclude, I concur that life is more convenient than it was because people have transportations to move and electronics which aid people to endure the life’s difficulties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ave different opinions either our lives more easier than it was or the opposite!. In my opi...
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Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... the time and I will be late which will affect on my study. At the end, I think transport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 293.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78839590444 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89655950405 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518771331058 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7586487517 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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