"nowadays, people maintain better health than they did in the past" agree or disagree?
Health is not valued till the sickness comes, everybody should monitor their fitness. In my opinion, recently, people are paying more attention to improve their heath than in the past. I feel in this way because we have not only tools but also, technology.
To begin with, people have a greater condition than in the past because they have many facilities such as gyms. In other words, societies can do some exercise by using gym which helps to keep their bodies healthy. In addition, when the bodies are healthy, people can avoid many diseases like diabetes. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. My father diagnosed with a prediabetes. His doctor advised my father to eat heathy food and do exercise as a routine to avert to have chronic disease. My father started doing exercise in a gym by doing workout and swimming. As a result, when my father visited his doctor again, he said my father’s heath has been improved. Because of our luxury facilities aid us to have better well-being than in the past.
Secondly, public healthier than before because they have technology. In fact, internet supports the background for many people and increase their knowledge for what is the best to do to get better heath such as what is the best food to control your blood pressure. For instance, my friend has a genetic uncontrol blood pressure. She needs to eat special food and avoid some of them. The online guides my friends to know which food has more salt than others and what is the food is the best for her health. Consequently, the internet websites support her to improve her health and live the life in the better way without any complain. If she had not read articles in internet, she would not have improved her health.
In conclusion, I think people have better welfare than in the past. This is because we have great services and we have development online resources to improve our healthiness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 682, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...id my father’s heath has been improved. Because of our luxury facilities aid us to have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78443113772 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49359321052 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508982035928 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8182654745 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0952380952 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09523809524 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171927041063 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581845075806 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742379931085 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115996014492 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113675528561 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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