do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Societies rules are a significant aspect in our life. Following the rules is a system in our society. In my opinion, I agree that young people should follow that rules even they are too strict for a couple of reasons. For example, to protect them and improve country.
To begin with, when the government or community sets guidelines, they expect from people follow it especially teenagers. Young people do not know what is right and what is wrong, thus, they need some rules to guide them. For example, in USA, they have rule for teenagers especially under twenty-one which prohibits them to drink alcohol. When the government set strict rules, they want to protect teenagers and protect the community from dangerous which makes by drunk people. Moreover, if the government or society expect from teenagers to follow the system, they should set some punishment for violating the laws. That is why I agree youth people should follow the rules even it too strict to protect themselves.
In addition, when government or society sets guidelines, it helps to develop the country and makes people know what they can do and what they cannot do. For example, when country decide to put inflexible rules on driving speed, they want to decrease the harmful; accidents, rate of death which results from speed. They will spend more money to fix the harmful which happened from the speed instead of that if people follow that rule and there isn’t accident, they will spend the money on country to improve. That is why I agree that young people should follow the rules to help develop the county and community.
To conclude, I agree that the rules which sets by government should youth people to follow because it will protect them form dangerous and it will help to improve country and counity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88524590164 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37136459909 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426229508197 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8960387988 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241517933975 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113313275712 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802359231468 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177126687792 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497573806512 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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