The ability to cooperate with other is more important today than in the past.
Do you agree or disagree?
No one can deny the fact that cooperation is very essential attribute one must have no matter whoever and wherever the person is. In the given scenario it is perceived that being cooperative is imperative today than it used to be before. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that everyone must have the ability to cooperate with other. However, people today undoubtedly need this feature to grest extent. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, owing to the advancement in technology people of this modern era spend more time surfing internet. To be more precise, they even do not care about the outside world which results in lacking connection with other. I have wittnessed this in my own personal life. My sister, she always gets bsuy either with her laptop or her phone. Similarly, she gets irritated when guest visisted her home. Indeed, this activity of her has made her more self centered person. She have zero level tolerance which is not good for her mentel health. Therefore, it is so true that modern people necessiate more level of cooperation so that they can be famaliarize with outside world.
Secondly, digitalization of today’s world offer many opportunities to the youth. They need to communicate with professionals of all over the world. In addition, every person have distinct nature. So, we need to make up our mind to face any sort of behaviour they portary. For instance, in an interview if interviewer show little rough behaviour but it is essential for interviewee to grab that job, then the interviewee have show patience rather that being aggresive towards interviewer. What I mean to clarify is we all need to be mindful that in this world of competition we have to have the guts to handle any kind of forthcoming situation. This way, we can pave our path to the betterment.
To sum up, youngesters of this modern age are available with opportunites to excell their path, they need to learn to be more patient since they ssem to ignore the outside world and enjoy their own company. It is always welcoming to be cooperative whether it is in present time or in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...laptop or her phone. Similarly, she gets irritated when guest visisted her home. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, i mean, in addition, kind of, sort of, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79624664879 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71777147605 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549597855228 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.7870565275 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3181818182 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168788274501 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511932273565 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593998680859 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105763182513 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540210040095 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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