Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
No one can deny the fact that everyone in the world attempt to achieve something bigger in their life. During the course, some people attain success in first place whereas some do not. In the given scenario, it is perceived that whether or not to chase what we want although they are likely to be impossible? Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that unquestionably, we should try harder and harder until we reach our goal. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, we all know no body is perfect in this world. Everybody has flaws in them and having said that this should not be the reason to neglect our dream to come true. To be more precise, although we failed in our first attempt, will the knowledge learned by our former mistake we can achieve our goal. Drawing from my own experience, my sister once she failed in an exam at first she was so frustrated at that time however she motivated herself to try again and second she worked harder than before. Then guess what? She aced her exam with top score. Indeed, with the high determination and courage we can achieve our goal someday for sure.
Secondly, the biggest attribute one can have is the courage to learn lesson from past mistake. Even though we failed in a first try we should not be disappointed instead we can try with distinct methodology learned from our past experience. I have witnessed in my own experience. What would happen if my sister had not tried for second attempt? Undoubtedly, she would never passed her exam. Most importantly, she applied all the knowledge that she gained from her prior mistake. Therefore, failure is a part of life and we should accept it as a lesson rather than a factor of demotivation.
The above mentioned statements sounds reasonable however we might get failures for hundredth times and we might even get frustrated with our life. This can affect our mental health and this should not be overlooked. Hence, we should always remember that everything happens for a good reason and keep in mind that success will surely come to the door of those who never step back from their dream.
All things considered, despite the fact that something in life seems not to be attainable, we should never give up and keep on trying until we reach our goal.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...he given scenario, it is perceived that whether or not to chase what we want although they are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...agraphs. To commence with, we all know no body is perfect in this world. Everybody has...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst attempt, will the knowledge learned by our former mistake we can achieve our...
^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rage to learn lesson from past mistake. Even though we failed in a first try we should not ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...h distinct methodology learned from our past experience. I have witnessed in my own experience....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65525672372 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49657556846 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525672371638 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8614664188 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7826086957 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158770630029 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468422741556 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378100645568 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109749003511 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322829620105 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...he given scenario, it is perceived that whether or not to chase what we want although they are...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...agraphs. To commence with, we all know no body is perfect in this world. Everybody has...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst attempt, will the knowledge learned by our former mistake we can achieve our...
^^
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rage to learn lesson from past mistake. Even though we failed in a first try we should not ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...h distinct methodology learned from our past experience. I have witnessed in my own experience....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65525672372 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49657556846 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525672371638 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8614664188 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7826086957 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7826086957 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158770630029 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468422741556 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378100645568 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109749003511 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322829620105 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.