Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way nations intercat with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
21st century is the best thing that has ever happened to the humanity. The technological advancements and scientific innovations strive to make the world a better place to live. Many devices and gadgets are being released to market on a day-to-day basis that make human lives easier. Among a multitude of innovations that have been made, I believe that introduction of computational systems are the most useful.
The computational research had begun long before the computers were invented. Initially, when the computers were released, they were used to perform financial calculations. It was not long after, that industry started realizing the powers and capabilities of a computer. They served the sole purpose of entertainment. Introduction of games in computers became a huge hit, which eliminated the need of specialized devices and sophisticated equipments for gaming. It also became replacement for televisions and magazines as a medium of entertainment.
Internet has helped people come closer. E-mails are the prime sources of formal communication, which has eliminated the painful and the slow process of conventional mails. Instant messaging and video conferencing services have enabled people in different geographic locations to work together. Computers have brought with them immense storage capabilities that does away with the tedious process of organizing and maintaining paper documents.
The advancements in area of Artificial Intelligence are worth mentioning. Without computational systems, mimicking parts of human brain would have been something of a distant dream. Sophia, the first humanoid, has been given a permanent citizenship in The United Arab Emirates. These humanoids are have the potential to help human race. Although we are far-fetched from achieving what the nature has given in the form of human intelligence, the challenge and the wide range of problems that the domain of computer science poses will continue to remain a topic of interest for decades to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to performing'.
Suggestion: used to performing
... the computers were released, they were used to perform financial calculations. It was not long...
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Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ited Arab Emirates. These humanoids are have the potential to help human race. Altho...
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Line 7, column 534, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...e domain of computer science poses will continue to remain a topic of interest for decades to come...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56535947712 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13648717458 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4099521279 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6315789474 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.45110844103 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829406563596 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0233771803463 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283537044987 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483118732441 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185938211497 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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