There are no great limits to growth because there are no limits to human intelligence, imagination and wonder. This quote by Ronald Regan is indeed true. Humans are progressive specie and this is evident by the revolutionary discoveries made by them through their acumen and persistence. Personally, I think innovation in computer science stream is most appealing. I think so for two reasons which I will explore in following essay.
First, the invention of network of connected devices i.e. internet has fundamentally modified the medium of communication in today's world. People nowadays prefer to get updates on social media or news feeds online which allows them to get instant updates on the go. E-commerce has transformed the way human shops, now humans can order almost anything from home or any other location without physically going to malls or grocery store. Social media is the most revolutionary change that is possible because of internet. People can network with people who are far away, share their ideas with others, find like-minded people using social media. My own personal example is compelling one, I use social media extensively to connect with students abroad in foreign universities to understand more about research and peers at a particular college. Also, it helps me to contact people who are planning to go for MS in computer science. Internet of Things (IOT) allows devices such as home appliances to be connected to internet. I use IOT to control home equipment remotely and also it allows me to see live feed of my house. Virtually everything is available online be it insurance, travel booking, online payment, dating apps, finding tutor and many more. Today internet is considered as fourth basic need of human.
Secondly, Artificial Intelligence is a new emerging field in Computer Science. This is most promising field which will fundamentally change the entire world. It gives machine the ability to think and function in optimal manner such that it is comparable to how humans work. There are various fields in which AI has already made its impact such as defence. Drones with image recognition technology can provide not only surveillance but also identify potential threats and can be programmed to take defensive actions against them. AI is used in detection of fraudulent online transactions; models can be trained to look for patterns and classify transactions. AI is also used in medical applications such as early detection of cancer, brain tumour with high accuracy.
In conclusion, I am of opinion that innovation in fields of computer science is important this is because first internet is ever evolving and second emerging fields such as Artificial Intelligence is continuously being improved to provide accurate results and outcomes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2344.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23214285714 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86134944237 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8400877013 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801352327562 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0220136090969 0.076458572812 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025393914992 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425073714422 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249173231426 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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