Agree/Disagree: To be successful, a business must spend a lot of money on advertising. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a shadow of a doubt, advertising plays a significant role in selling products. Therefore, there is a widely held view among people that a business can achieve success through a huge investment in advertising. However, I, personally, subscribe to the view that although a good advertisement can help boost sales, it cannot help a business succeed. There are two important reasons that support my statement, and I will clearly explain them in the following essay.
To begin with, companies should improve the quality of their products rather than spend a lot of money on advertising. To be more specific, customers primarily choose products with high quality due to the fact that they do not want their money to be wasted. Hence, to be successful, companies should get satisfaction from customers by enhancing the quality of products to increase their sales and compete with other companies. As an illustration of this, during the day, we all receive many promotional messages from known and unknown companies. We see many advertisements while watching TV, walking in the street and so on. Sometimes they are attractive because companies use famous artists, or giving special offers to customers to persuade them to buy their products. When trying goods and are not satisfied because of their bad qualities, customers never purchase them again and go for competing products. Therefore, I truly believe that whereas advertising is essential, it would become diminished if the quality of the products were not excellent.
Moreover, a business should provide its clients with an efficient after-sales service. To put it in another word, companies should attract customers by their after-sales service because the customers rely more on after-sales service than advertising. As a matter of fact, due to after-sales service, they can refund their money if the quality of products is not superb. In this matter, many companies have a policy for getting attention from customers. That is, customers can give back their goods whether or not they used them. Hence, A business should spend much money on after-sales service even more than advertising because the more client trust them, the more they purchase their products. My own experience is a compelling example of this notion. A few years ago, I bought a screen protector for my phone from a good company, but when I tried to put the screen protector on my phone, it broke. I sent an e-mail to the company and explained how the screen protector was broken. They sent me a screen protector again and two more screen protectors to receive my attention. Had that company not had brilliant after-sales service, I would not have purchased them again.
For all the reasons that I mentioned above, I believe that for being successful, a business ought to less spend money on advertising, primarily to due to the fact that customers not only care more about quality of products than advertising but also use the products that have a fantastic after-sales service not having superior advertising.
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Suggestion: whether
...is, customers can give back their goods whether or not they used them. Hence, A business shoul...
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... I would not have purchased them again. For all the reasons that I mentioned abo...
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...ervice not having superior advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2548.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11646586345 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85280807187 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475903614458 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4594012902 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139315010026 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412014982412 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399041406081 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105314232102 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349407228229 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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