Agree or disagree with the following statement:
Standardized tests like the TOEFL provide sufficient information to determine whether students should be admitted to a college or university.
Standardized tests are significant for students to get admission in university they want. These test are vital because it helps to check the ability of a person either they are capable of studying in such college or not. These tests are necessary and it manage that who is the deserving person for the merit seat . This essay will discuss why the sufficient knowledge for these test is important .
First, thousands of people every year apply for universities but only few of them handle to do further studies. In addition, without such exam numerous undeserving people get the chance . For instance, one of my friend gets addmission on basis of her father money. She was a failure of our class and at the same time i accustomed to be a topper of every year. My father do not have enough money. As a result, I didi not have any alternative except to my studies. That was so painful for my parents but fortunately next year government announced for such test to get in. By the grace of God next year i passes that exam and got admission in one of the finest school.
Secondly, these test are arduous and essential because everyone have their different criteria to take students. For example, being a pharmacist i do not have any idea when i move so I have to give my licsense paper. During my studies I realized that their is multitude things that i have not read it before. Now I am capable of doing extraordinary things and runs m independent store.
Third, As we grow up we have our goals and to chase them you must have to full fil the requirements of that specific educational institute where you want to study,. For example, I gave TOEFL that is the English proficiency test and the first step of getting the licsense and in one attempt i got the desired score.
In my oipnion, such test helps to improve your abilities to learn and to chase your goal for a university you want to get in. According to me its good to check persons capibilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5269121813 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61080054967 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541076487252 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0191189078 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911636356982 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301927133957 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397910183393 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551511720524 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420805253857 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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