Agree or disagree with the following statement:Standardized tests like the TOEFL provide sufficient information to determine whether students should be admitted to a college or university.

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Agree or disagree with the following statement:

Standardized tests like the TOEFL provide sufficient information to determine whether students should be admitted to a college or university.

Nowadays, there are numerous methods for applying to a university or college, and every students dream is to continue their education, and acquire abundant knowledge for enlighting their future. As we all know, the most common and popular way of application to a higher education system is standardized tests. Moreover, with the help of these tests, schooling organizations choose whether to accept or decline the student, who wants to continue his or her education in that schooling system. I consider these tests, as a very beneficial method of proving your knowledge.
Firstly, this concept is very advantegues for students worldwide, who want to go and study abroad, and the reason for this strong statement is that while staying in their own country, they can go to specific places and take those standardized examinations. Moreover, this activety is highly effective, cheap, and less time consuming. Thus, all of these factors make it very helpful and worthwhile for all of the students globally.
Secondly, these standardized examinations are profitable for education systems too. To be more precise, due to these tests, universities and colleges do not have to examine those students who took standardized tests. As we all know, hosting an exam is a very expansive event, and not only that, abundant amount of funds are needed to organize this activity. Consequently, the aspect of having international tests is highly beneficial for schooling centers, and for their economy.
Thirdly, I assume that these exams help you to encounter lots of opportunities in the future. Because the factor of having succeeded in an international test, will make you a very precious employee in the future. In contemporary world, successful companies are looking for workers who have high potential in a specific field all around the world. And having an worldwide known diploma, will boost your chance to get a job in those companies.
In conclusion, I assume that standardized tests are both advantageous for students and for education centers.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26380368098 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96985747903 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542944785276 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.782575549 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971331024916 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339825892353 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363870538523 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065397156617 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306928703198 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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