You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, studying abroad is one of the most complicated and extraordinary path to choose. Besides all of those challenges which will occur, if you pick to study abroad, actually, millions of students worldwide choose this milestone. As we all know, every action has its own consequences, and these events, which you will encounter on the way, may be positive or negative. However, the experiences which you will get could be very entertaining.
Firstly, if i choose to study abroad, the hardest challenge for me, would be the feeling of homesick. I consider myself very close to my family, and being far from them, could give me some anxiety attacks, which could have a detrimental influence on my studies and daily lifestyle. To my mind, it would take me a long period of time to adapt to the environment of isolation from the family.
On the other hand, studying abroad could have a worthwhile impact on my future. To be honest, i assume that the education in my country, especially in local universities, is tragedic, and studying in those local universities would not help me to brighten up my future. Not only that, I assume the opportunities for me, in the future, would be much more abundant if I finish my education abroad. Indeed, who does not want to get superior education? Because of this concept, it would be highly beneficial for my proffesional, and prospective career, to study abroad, and obtain the best possible education.
To my mind, the experience itself would be much more enjoyable. Because, by arriving to a new society and environment, I can get enormous amounts of mixed emotions. To be more precise, I could explore the culture and the society, which I find very interesting. Moreover, I could socielize with new people, which i will encounter on my daily basis. Thus, I assume, it would be beneficial for me to enlarge my surrounding, and try to understand those peoples outlook on this world.
In conclusion, I consider studying abroad as a very respectful and enjoyable career path to choose. However, there could be amply amount of difficulties in this milestone, and there is a significant risk of not being able to complete this path. But, by staying strong and decisive, you can accomplish whatever you want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90288713911 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90609145716 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522309711286 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0317093853 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153793639089 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586690835856 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602738755347 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106374717965 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819044836635 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.