You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
If I plan to study abroad next year, this will certainly be a significant experience in my life. However, in my view, there are pros and cons about studying in a foreign country, and this essay will provide more reasons why I believe this notion and give further examples to support my idea.
First of all, quality educations are provided abroad. There are talented professors and effective facilities that support worldwide students to improve their skills and knowledge, and those are reasons why I desire to study at Harvard University. Therefore, many students in the world want to apply to this institute to be taught by the best in the field. For instance, having this opportunity, I obviously will be able to become more professional. Moreover, learning in a class which aggregates with many committed classmates is the best opportunity to communicate with gifted students from diverse cultures. They will give you more aspects about their culture stories, and this will improve myself to be lettered and equable to others.
On the contrary, I am of the opinion that studying abroad will take me far from my familiar life. It is regrettable that going somewhere distantly from my hometown and my lovely family will make me homesick. Homesickness not only will obstruct my studying but also will negatively influence on my mental health. With homesickness, I will not be able to completely concentrate on my education, which may result in lackluster academic performance. Moreover, the mental symptoms from it such as depression will disturb my life in a foreign country to more difficult than before. I can attest this from my experience, when I apply to the summer course abroad. I feel unfamiliar to staying alone and take responsibility for housework. Nostalgia gradually makes me unhappy and reduces my curiosity. For this reason, I disfavor to live abroad because I will miss my hometown.
In conclusion, I believe that I will acquire a good experience from study abroad. This is because although it will be apart me of my familiar hometown which tend me to develop homesickness and many mental illnesses. Studying abroad will give me quality educations to improve my knowledge.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09392265193 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89087572887 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516574585635 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7767971859 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208487939274 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733405069962 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593754601723 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151811841193 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472810741135 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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