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agree or disagree: It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

Every one of us knows that teachers are most responsible and they play big roll into children's development. As a result, many parents and children respect professors. Accordingly, many people think that teachers are not as respected as they were in the past. From my vantage point, teachers were really more appreciated in the past than they are today.First of all, in the past teachers were only source through which children gained knowledge. For example, in the past people could not afford television or computers to their children. Like a result, children were more eager to go to school and to learn new things about the world. Moreover, throughout the lecturers, pupils in the past couldn't be distracted by the intelligent appliances such as mobile phones, tablets or smart watches which is very common case today. Personally, I think that many children today using their phones during the lecturers, and they are unaware how much disrespect they show for their lecturers without paying attention to their professors. This is a huge and very crucial factor who make me to think that teachers aren't very respected today.Second, today's modern families, especially parents defend their children and in most cases they always blame the teachers about their children behavior. For instance, if children are not so good at school their parents, without to see the big picture, immediately make the professor responsible for their children's failure. As a result, many children are spoil which increase the possibility they to disrespect their teachers without paying attention during the classes. Furthermore, I have heard many examples where student yell at the professors or make fun with them without to get responsibility for their bad behavior. The examples I have heard and seen have shown me that today's modern generation don't respect the professors, and the positive influences that lecturers give to the students are not as appreciated as it was in the past.To sum up, I believe that children don't respect the teachers as in the past and I have two main reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, the modern technology make drastic changes on children's behavior which is the one of the main reasons why they behave in so disrespectful manner to their professors. Secondly, I think that parents don't respect the teacher as in the past, and because children are with their parents during the most of the day, they learn from them and behave in the same way, disrespecting their lecturer. These are two main reasons why teachers were more regarded in the past. Simply, professors in the past represented a symbol of knowledge.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, first of all, in most cases, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 9999.0 1977.66487455 506% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1026.0 407.700716846 252% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.74561403509 4.8611393121 200% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.65961436461 4.48103885553 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.53233637158 2.67179642975 319% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.239766081871 0.524837075471 46% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 2429.1 618.680645161 393% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.51630824373 158% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.1344086022 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 522.641037404 48.9658058833 1067% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 588.176470588 100.406767564 586% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.3529411765 20.6045352989 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.7058823529 5.45110844103 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00609326483627 0.236089414692 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00367902739027 0.076458572812 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00731104161484 0.0737576698707 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00609326483627 0.150856017488 4% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 54.7 11.7677419355 465% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -57.1 58.1214874552 -98% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 26.7 6.10430107527 437% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 10.1575268817 355% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 40.16 10.9000537634 368% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.0537634409 259% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.247311828 283% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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