Life’s comfort is an issue that approximately all of the human being all over the world deals with. By the way, it is a very challenging issue whether the age that we live in is more comfortable or the age that our grandparents lived. in my point of view, quality and convenience of life in this decade is undoubtedly better than in past decades in the light of the presence of technology and also high health care level.
Needless to say, technology is one of the most striking improvements of human in the last century. In this case the quality of the transportation system in one the most prominent items which is affected by the technology. For instance, I myself read a book that traveling duration when the human discovered America continent was very long even it took several months to approach there by ship. Also, there were people who died during the trip and never could reach their dreams. However, today our modern airplanes take us to other countries in other continents in a few hours. Due to technology, not only we can transmit in very short durations but also we are safe.
Secondly, it is a fact that all of the humans care about their bodies intensely and try to keep it in healthy condition. Improvement of health and surgery equipment excel the curing process of disease. For example, I am a football lover and I play with my friends every weekend, unfortunately, in one of my matches in the last year my knee injury and I were not able to play again. There was the only solution and it was an operation on my knee, so after that operation, I gained my healthiness again and even proceeded my football career. Undoubtedly, this kind of injury was not curable in our grandparents' era and had to say goodbye to their hobby. Consequently, we are more comfortable with a strong body thanks to good health care.
All things considered, I agree with the idea that today’s life is easier in comparison with our ancestors' childhood. technology and healthfulness are two major reasons that improve life statement. It is the high time governments spent more budget to make available utensils in hospitals and utilize technology in our cities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, kind of, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7328042328 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8137566635 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558201058201 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4721645919 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3888888889 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186104072195 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482168521111 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412530987035 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106571774328 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347470039511 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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