Needless to say, a sundry of people there are who back the idea that telling some white lies is agreeable and it does not disturb relationships. However, I have personally subscribed to the view that evading from telling the truth is harmful. Not only does it diminish the reliability between the individuals but it also paves the way for doing other harmful actions.
Firstly, the first and the most prominent sense for lasting a relationship is the sense of honesty between two persons. having been told a lie, a person does not trust his partner anymore. For example, I am an emotional and profoundly sensitive person. I had a girlfriend who was in the relationship with me for many years. Seldom did she go to a place without telling me. One day, when I asked her to meet each other, she told me that she had an exam and she would rather have stayed at home and studied. Since I have never been heard a lie from her, I accepted. However, after a few days, I learned that she had concealed some facts and she had not any exam. I found out she was at a party that night. Consequently, I lost my reliance on her and never did I trust her again.
Secondly, undoubtedly, never can anybody ever cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that small and forgivable bad habits trigger people sometimes toward big crimes. A person, who is used to saying lies, is convenience with doing other unpleasant actions. For instance, I had a friend who was famous to be a liar. He was late for all classes at the university, and he told always unbelievable reasons for his delay. Everyone knew he was telling lies. There was a supermarket on our campus. My friend always took some goods from that supermarket without paying for them, and when the man in the supermarket asked him to pay, he lied as if he has given the money. This bad habit seemed a normal act to him, and he continued to steal different things from alternative shops. He became a thief, and he is captive in prison now. As a result, maybe telling a lie is not a big crime but tempts the individuals to other terrific tasks.
To put in the nutshell, in no account would I agree with the idea that we can hide the truth and tell lies. Neither of liars is dependable, and they are inclined to do bigger crimes. It is high time we got rid of our bad habits and tried to be honest in all situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...e sense of honesty between two persons. having been told a lie, a person does not trus...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'told'.
Suggestion: always told
...r all classes at the university, and he told always unbelievable reasons for his delay. Eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37844036697 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53462990397 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532110091743 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7386620598 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4230769231 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57692307692 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116300251275 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321603114892 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548906043336 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824344141725 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430265208935 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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