Agree or disagree
Successful leader should take quick decision because taking time in decision may affect people they lead.
commanders have an enormous leverage on our society. They influence in a direct and in an intangible ways. It is utterly important to appreciate their efforts to lead our nations on a correct path. Although some people hole the view point that leaders should be faster in decision makings for their own follower benefit. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. In my perception which has led me to agree with the idea that bosses should think twice before decision could be make. In the following essay I shall delve into possible reasons.
To commence with, fast opinion could affect the leader’s reputation negatively. Speedy ideas and thought held by the leaders make their followers believe that they are not wise enough for this position. For instance, the head group of my baseball team cancels our training program. Hence, we have been trained for last few weeks ago to be prepared for final team competition games. Accordingly, his decision led him lost his team trust. Eventually, all the teams never vote for him as a chief of the group in the next year. Apparently, it must be taken in consideration that haste notion will lead to loss people and followers trust.
In addition, fast point of view wills mostly leaders to negative results. These inacceptable endings may be hard to fix and ends with a catastrophic endings. For example, any country leader should keep in his mind that his decision effects the people who under his protection. He should provide a high level of welfare and life standard to them. Last decision to president, Trump, leads to many federal workers to stay one month and half asking themselves how are going to provide foods for their families. This decision by shutdown the government, affect their lives and their families negatively. Furthermore, some could not continue to pay their bills .In view of the fact that leaders should consider the results of their decision.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons which I mentioned before, taking all factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea that fast decision will affect the leaders reputation negatively and ends with dramatic effects for their followers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04383561644 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64617825093 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591780821918 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3325334516 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6818181818 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238652836023 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604314333121 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485851852207 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148464552559 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360010547859 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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