Agree or Disagree
The automobile is destroying our quality of life.
Automobile makes our life easy and fast. I think they make our life more comfortable in travelling then before. Some people believe automobile is destroying quality of life. I disagree with with that opinion.
Cars makes easy transportation for us. In our residential area not available all essential things. So, we have to go to that place like vegetable market, departmental store, arcade store for purchase things. If we have car, we don't have to wait for bus/ public transportation and not worry to get seat in it. Also, worry about mind for safety for purse and things which bought. Therefore, we have to need attentive for things which we purchased at market because we don't know person around us in bus. In our car, we have no tension regarding above mentioned points.
Secondly, by own vehicle we reach exact place where we want to go. General transportation service not available at every place. It arrived & depart from specific place, for that reason we have to manage to reach that place on time. No such problem we have to face if we have our own car. In emergency case, private motor-vehicle is the best option for transport. For instance, one day our neighbor had severe chest pain & we feared that it might be heart attack. At that time by car we reach to the near hospital and treated him. So, at that time because of car we no need to wait for even ambulance as well.
Everything comes with its own pros and cons. By own car for every single people, we waste ever money as well as damage environment by increasing air pollution. We may become lazy and fatty because of use of automobile for even short distance. Obesity makes attracts many disease which is not good for health.
At last, I think use of everything in moderate amount is best for us. Excessive use always harm ourselves. With above mentioned points, I feel that moderate use of automobile improving our quality of life but excessive use may destroying it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70029673591 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57593917284 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8592000041 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9230769231 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9615384615 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139911091282 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552826126089 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107142234792 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12788990604 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138882711637 0.0645574589148 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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