Agree or disagree: - Subjects such as art, music and drama should be a part of every child’s basic education
In our school days, we attain not only science, maths and language but also drawing, crafts and physical activity classes also. That means not only texbook education is important but also extra curricular activity also valuable. I agree with this statement that arts, music and drama subjects should be a part of every child's basic education.
By textbook subjects like maths and science we know facts and truths thats helps to smoothen our life and makes world
better in future by introduce inovations. But same time we needs some relaxing and creative things to active our mind that
comes from subjects like arts, maths and drama. In arts we get a skills that makes our life good. For examples, by knowing wood crafting we makes things that needed for furniture, house-hold things, kitchen appliences, etc. Arts and craft classes makes our mind creative and hands to be skillfull. Music give us inner peace. Music is evoluted with the science. Music
changes person mood - it make or worse the mood. Like in war, war songs provides strength and encourage warriors that kind they even ready to fight untill their last breath. By music we can express feeling. Music is for everyone and every situation. In our culture, life start with birthday song and even end with song. Music classes are necessary for students to express their emotions. By drama we know the history. We understand our ancesters life styles, their life-experiences, difficult circumstances and how to deal with them. By drama class, we express ourselves in front of mass people, express and share emotioms. (30 min) Drama helps to improve our communication skills. Even by body gastures without uttering any word, we can communicate with others that we learn in drama and dance classes.
So, education as whole not involve only true and concrete information but to develop creative ideas and know how to
thinks which we gain by subjects such as art, music and drama. By science and maths we know what is right or wrong and what to think, by art, music and drama we know how to think and get creative in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
...g, crafts and physical activity classes also. That means not only texbook education ...
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...part of every childs basic education. By textbook subjects like maths and scie...
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...hs and science we know facts and truths thats helps to smoothen our life and makes wo...
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...lps to smoothen our life and makes world better in future by introduce inovations...
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... introduce inovations. But same time we needs some relaxing and creative things to ac...
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... creative things to active our mind that comes from subjects like arts, maths and...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a skill' or simply 'skills'?
Suggestion: a skill; skills
...e arts, maths and drama. In arts we get a skills that makes our life good. For examples,...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'make'
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...r examples, by knowing wood crafting we makes things that needed for furniture, house...
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...ce. Music is evoluted with the science. Music changes person mood - it make or wors...
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...usic is evoluted with the science. Music changes person mood - it make or worse t...
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
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...ience. Music changes person mood - it make or worse the mood. Like in war, war son...
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... we learn in drama and dance classes. So, education as whole not involve only ...
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... how to think and get creative in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42482609546 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552112676056 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2098450232 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2173913043 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4347826087 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.95652173913 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221318906163 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726391339778 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102383150476 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101569716372 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828029524386 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.