Agree or disagree :- It is more important to work at job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high paying job that you do not enjoy
our life mainly divide in 3 phases. First one is education period, which last upto 20-25 years. last is retirement phase which mostly after sixties. In between these two period, there is very much important duration of money making also called as working period. we do jobs in this period and make money which helps for our family survival. if I have two option like high paid but un-enjoyable job or enjoyable but with low salary; I choose second one.
if you enjoy your working its has great benefits on health, professions and social. if you not liking your job, you easily stress out that is not good for your mental as well as physical health. An unhappy person easily gets depression, high blood pressure and sugar kind of illness; he never make self or family happy. In opposite, a person who has low salary but joyful job makes self and family happy. A person has not force himself for work therefore he easily concentrate more on work and complete their tasks before time in enjoyable job. he spend rest of the time on family and friends, that’s make him socially happy. An enjoyable job-person easily self-encouragement to do good in job which gets help you in your future career, which can make you earn more money and respect.
if you like your job, you do more in your field like invent new methods, do research. if you get demanding, time consuming, stressful but with good salary job you can buy luxury but not happiness. money makes you wealthy but not healthy.
From help of money we can buy a food but not hunger, buy a joke but not smile, buy house but not sweet-home, make new relations but not maintain it, it help to pay a hospital bills but not buy a life. that’s why money is not the only important thing in life. Sometimes a happy person can live more quality life than a wealthy person. we needs our basic needs like meal for eating, home for living, clothes for wearing. if we get this from an enjoyable job, I prefer this job than a stressful unhappy job. therefore, I agree with the statement of an essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39569767846 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512195121951 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6789070585 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4090909091 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7727272727 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370678808761 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105186103025 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956171633342 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225668282554 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704639374863 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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