do you agree or disagree :- There are times when it is acceptable not to tell the truth
Famous phrase says that "Truth is God". I am agree with the statement says that there are times when it is acceptable not to tell the truth. I believe this for several reasons with I mention in following paragraphs.
Sometimes truth is bitter and not easily acceptable by people. For instance, During routine checkup doctor finds cancer to his patient. He doesn't tell directly about his cancer. He has to evaluate first patient mental strength and then decide to tell or not. He can give some rough idea that it can be cancer but we will figure it out in next session. Straight truth tellers sometimes create trouble for themselves. You can't tell you boss obese or bald even it is true, if you do so your job might be in trouble. We have to decide for telling truth or not depend upon condition and situation. Sometimes keep quiet is better than truth. In Mahabharata, the Indian epic, Dhronacharya (Pandava's teacher) main reason for death is not telling truth about his son's death news by Yudhistira (one of the Pandavas). Which is one of the turning point in Mahabharat war which brought victory for Pandavas.
Sometimes not telling truth makes us uncomfortable and guilty. By telling truth, we have not hide anything and so we feel free from inside. We not feel guilty for hiding contents. It is good for teller but sometimes not good for listener. In my opinion, we should not directly tell bitter unacceptable truth to superior and weak person, it is harmful for us in case of superior and them in case of weak people.
Hence, I think that sometimes bitter truth can be wrap with sweet lie so listening person can digest it. I am not favor the lie or false telling, but sometimes no answer is better than truth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ays that 'Truth is God'. I am agree with the statement says that there are ...
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...th I mention in following paragraphs. Sometimes truth is bitter and not easily...
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Suggestion: doesn't
... doctor finds cancer to his patient. He doesnt tell directly about his cancer. He has ...
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...trength and then decide to tell or not. He can give some rough idea that it can be...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...imes create trouble for themselves. You cant tell you boss obese or bald even it is ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...war which brought victory for Pandavas. Sometimes not telling truth makes us unc...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'hid', 'hidden'.
Suggestion: hid; hidden
...d guilty. By telling truth, we have not hide anything and so we feel free from insid...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rior and them in case of weak people. Hence, I think that sometimes bitter tru...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'favored'.
Suggestion: favored
...istening person can digest it. I am not favor the lie or false telling, but sometimes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, as to, for instance, i think, in my opinion, it is true, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66557377049 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47633247381 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9928630631 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7619047619 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5238095238 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278823572255 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844484926305 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103060338386 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161104978019 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810065524605 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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