“There are times when it is acceptable not to tell the truth.”
Do you agree or disagree?
Truth can mean the absolute fact or some information that cannot be refuted. While there are times when lies would ease our lives, I do think that truth should always be spoken and communicated to whomever it concerns. The essay shall talk about this stance in detail in the upcoming paragraphs.
It is said that truth liberates a person. Consider the following example.
A person likes his friend badly and wants to date her. If he does not convey this information to her, she would never know the truth and if she has feelings for him, they would not be together because both hid the truth. However, if he tells her the truth, she can either accept or reject him. Either way, the person is free because he has nothing to hide and is upfront about his feelings to her. He would not have to worry about she liking someone else or regretting the fact that he had a chance but he never dared to do so.
Truth is also the key to better relationships and it fosters a bond. When people say things from their hearts without any filter, they can resolve their problems and strengthen their bonds. Let us look at an example. A couple lives together. The guy has the habit of playing loud music but this disturbs the girl. The girl thinks that if she would say this to her husband, he might stop listening to music. The husband is oblivion to this and thinks that the wife also enjoys it. Now if the wife does not say it, the husband would never know this and it would disturb her mental peace and disturb her. If she says, he would simply lower the volume or use earphones and the problem would be solved in an instant.
A person can live a more valuable life when presented with the truth. If a person knows the truth, he or she would value or devalue things better. Often, people who are diagnosed with terminal illnesses are not told the truth by their families. While this might save the person from misery, they would not have the time to live their remaining life on their terms and they would spend the time thinking there is a lot of time on their hands. The truth gives them the power to do whatever they want.
Thus, lying in difficult or challenging situations maybe the easier way out but the truth prevails and it leads to liberation, power, and better relationships and bonds between people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 436, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'likes'.
Suggestion: likes
...r. He would not have to worry about she liking someone else or regretting the fact tha...
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Line 6, column 408, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...band, he might stop listening to music. The husband is oblivion to this and thinks ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48341232227 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1931455649 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507109004739 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4121393462 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.68 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.88 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.24 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161959716991 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485780975998 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566911342105 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918965044793 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535564659289 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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