All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Give example and reason of support
Some people are inclined towards the attribute that all university students should take history classes, whereas, others hold the opposite perspective. I personally, though, believe that taking history courses by all the university students regardless of their field of study is not a better choice. No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of not taking history class by the students. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that university is a place where students want to learn their interesting fields. Obviously, it will be of no benefit when students are forced to learn history as they will not put their heart and soul in it. As a person, I strongly agree that knowing about our history is an essential thing.But on the other hand, if the students have a zero interest in the subject, they will not do justice to the course.Consequently, they just waste their precious time which can be utilize in learning something from their field. As a result, the academic performance of the students gets affected because they are reading history courses just for the sake of grades or obligation. For instance, one of my friends who was doing aeronautical engineering and didn't have any inclination towards history had to take a history course. Eventually, he failed his examination as his mind got scattered and he was not able to prepare well for it. Therefore, this example illustrates that if he has a choice of eliminating history courses, the results would be opposite and he would not have to suffer.
Secondly,to explain it more broadly, people join university to be experts in a specific area of study instead of basically knowing everything. Actually, in my opinion, the purpose of going to university is to study selected courses in the field we want to specialize in. Therefore, pressurizing students to study subjects that are of no interest to them, probably make students reluctant to pursue higher education.
Finally, the last thing I want to mention is that in our school days, we study basic history which I think is sufficient for a person. Also, to add to this, if anyone shows interest in taking history courses and wants to learn more about history may take these courses.
In the light of the above reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that history courses must not be compulsory courses regardless of the field of study, rather they can be optional and depend on personal choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95294117647 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78354432893 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508235294118 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8459176306 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.823529412 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3529411765 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403815553642 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128720463926 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759916398 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228662255202 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085458902729 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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