always tell the truth
What makes people's relationships highly special? It is a controversial question that leads to thousands of debates. While most of people might consider any characteristic other than telling the truth as a vital role in any relationship, in my opinion, honesty is the most essential part of all relations that makes it extremely strong and long-lasting.
To begin with, telling the reality to people is beneficial because it leads to strong bones tightness and trustworthiness among people. To be more specific, if two friends always being honest with each other, they will continue to hang-out together and share their own problems and updated without any hesitation. For example, Last year, I went with my best friend Sara to her graduation party. Since it was a long while we did not meet because she for her final exams. I met with another person and had fun for the period when she was busy with her studies. Accordingly, when she asked me about what I did in that period, I told her that I had to find another person to enjoy the time with until she would finish her papers. Although I was afraid to tell her the truth so that she might break our friendship by being jealous, unexpectedly, she fully understood why I did that! As a result, we continue going out together and have fun. If I lied to my best friend and did not tell her that I enjoyed my time with another person, she would not have trusted me again.
Instead, some people believe that telling the truth would put their relations with others to the edge. In a broader context. if people tell the truth all the time in some circumstances they believe that they need to lie to save the relation. Especially, strong relations like husband and wife. Being honest recently, some men think that women are extremely emotional and will not forgive easily, so they had rather lie about it to save their marriages. For instance, two years ago, my friend Jamal went for a picnic with his family, and there was one woman from the group tried to convince him to make an affair with her. Although he sent her many messages that he did not like to cheat on his wife, he afraid to confess when his wife caught him texting the woman. Unfortunately, he had rather lied about it than lied than telling the truth to save his relationship with his wife. As a result, they continue to live together with joy and love. Therefore, if he told the reality that day to his partner, he might have lost her forever.
In conclusion, Although it is preferable that honesty should be spreading out among people all the time which would lead to a solid relationship based on trustworthiness, there are always some exceptions to this theory that a person needs to lie in some situations in order not to jeopardize his relations with close people. Thus, I recommend everyone to tell the truth so that all people might live happily all together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion: lain
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Suggestion: he's afraid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2379.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 511.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65557729941 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58906106466 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463796477495 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6072277207 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.434782609 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2173913043 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184095816152 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550230987389 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720264692722 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124073240018 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233429202219 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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