telling the truth
Have you ever thought of what can push your friendships towards the edge? You might never believe that this can be happened by being honest with a friend all the time. In fact, being honest with people is a vital factor in any relation, and some people might consider it their first priority. We definitely must not say the truth all the time because being truthful can lead to social miscommunications between friends which is dangerous, and because it can elevate the sense of anxiety that leads to stress in life.
First and foremost, telling the truth to a friend can be risky sometimes because it will immediately put an end to a long relationship.especially when it hurts other's people's feelings. When a person explains his opinion regarding any issue that his friend might have, unintentionally he might find himself being misunderstood or being in a pleasant situation. As a result, a decrease in social interaction could have occurred and people might lose their faithful friends after all. In the past, although our parents had raised us on no matter what happened we should never lie to people, even if it cost us to lose somebody at the end. However, if individuals apply this recently, they might end up lonely. According to recent studies on friendly coupes who know each other secrets, 80% of them are preferring not to provide any negative opinions because they are afraid of hurting each other's feelings, so that's how they avoid problems and live peacefully. This tells us the importance of small lies. For instance, last year, when I was working my friend came to me seeking my opinion regarding her new pair of shoes that she had bought from the mall. Unfortunately, I gave her a negative answer about them such as their color and style are old-fashioned. As a result, she went back to her desk without a single ward, and on the next day, she did not greet me in the morning as usual. Had I simply said that her shoes were fabulous, I would not have lost her relationship today.
In addition, being honest regularly might put a person on a deep pressure which in turn increases his anxiety level, and ultimately negatively affect his health. For example, after my friend that day turned around and went to her desk, I was so worried thinking about me jeopardized our relation. My feeling was indulged with the fear of losing her. Although I communicated my feelings towards her new shoes with complete honesty, things went wrong completely after all. Moreover, I was also had thought about what should I do in order to solve this problem. Do I have to go back to her and apologize or just keep silent until she calms down and talks back to me? Consequently, my stress level had increased and I started to feel pain on my heart. This story was clear evidence and illustrated how being honest with a friend can lead to health problems.
In sum, I strongly believe that people should always tell the truth to a friend could destroy a friendship. This is because not only it will cause social isolation between friends, but also it will negatively affect your health. Moreover, it might cause serious misunderstanding which might let a person end up regretting forever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ho know each other secrets, 80% of them are preferring not to provide any negative opinions be...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...aid of hurting each others feelings, so thats how they avoid problems and live peacef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, after all, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2643.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 555.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76216216216 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73401441745 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5945026909 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.653846154 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3461538462 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991892620429 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322788090642 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791781417249 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773675960735 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530885729005 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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