When we, as humans being, are asked about what are we looking in someone else when it comes to a friendship or a romantic relationship, we tend to name “honesty” as one of the most important qualities we could ask for in a person. And this is completely natural and normal, because people tend to relate being honest, with being respected; and everyone wants to be respected. That’s why I agree with the fact that saying the truth, is a fundamental pillar in every single relationship I’ve decided to build though my life.
Scientifically it is known that social interactions are a need in human’s life, as we can see stated in the Maslow’s Hyerarchy of Needs. And for those who are all day surrounded by family members, friends, co-workers or even a partner, it is important to know the people we are surrounded by are on the same page as us. Also when it comes to people with who we build a personal relationship and become open about our truths, we expect them to be as sincere as we are. At the moment this person stops being honest, it tends to generate in ourselves conflict about how open we were with one another and this may lead to problems in future relationships. It can become harder to trust and, in many cases, be trusted.
On the other hand, when we’re honest with one another, we give the person the right to decide whether they want us in their lives or not, it’s not our decision anymore. Which is somehow good, because it could determinate the level of compromise of that person towards us. We can share a moment to be real, and let others to be real too. Keeping secrets can cause stress and anxiety, and at the moment we let those secrets go, and decide to be sincere about something with someone, even if we are accepted or not, it is a fact that we’re going to feel better with ourselves at the end of the day and relief the pressure.
Lastly, I think it is important to say the truth at all matters since it’s easier to generate a negative feeling against the other person at the moment we find out lies or hidden secrets and these feelings of betraying don’t go as easily as we would like. Depending in the emotional stability of the person who has been lied to, this could lead to many consequences that could be a perfect example of this saying: “the cure is worse than the illness”, being the actions this person takes “the cure” and “the illness” not being honest from the beginning; like, for example, revenge such as blackmailing.
In my opinion, settling for being an honest person at all cost with the people I relate with is highly important to build trust in myself and everyone who surrounds me. I’ve always been told that the truth will make us free, and the lies and secrets are always found out sooner or later, and thanks to my experience I can state that this is completely true.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 405, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...ants to be respected. That's why I agree with the fact that saying the truth, is a fundamental pill...
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Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rrounded by are on the same page as us. Also when it comes to people with who we bui...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
... the other person at the moment we find out lies or hidden secrets and these feelin...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lain'.
Suggestion: lain
...al stability of the person who has been lied to, this could lead to many consequence...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...nd everyone who surrounds me. I've always been told that the truth will make us free, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, look, may, so, for example, i think, such as, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2407.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 517.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65570599613 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71509965577 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483558994197 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5927000427 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.4375 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3125 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0590064174777 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254739104308 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336493360883 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474496516607 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379594726212 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 11.7677419355 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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