Are parents best teachers?
Nowadays, in fast progressing world, it is important for all people to learn as much as they can. But whether parents could be best teacher or not? I strongly believe that they are best instructors because they are the first teachers in children lives and they know what their children would be known. These reasons are discussed in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, they are the first children teachers. Before people go to schools they could have been learned by their parents. In fact, before entering schools they have to spend the most part of their time with their parents. Therefore, they have learned a lot of things that their parents have told them. Furthermore, according to researchers, children spend a lot of their time with their parents and they see their parents' behavior; consequently, they learn by their parents' treatment than other people. So parents are best teachers.
Secondly, they know what their children should learn. In the other words, since parents know their children, know about their desires, know what equipment they have in their home like computers, and know about their talents. They could be best teacher for them.
To sum up, I believe that parents are best teachers in everybody's live if they done it properly because they are the first teacher of every person and they know about their children more than other people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'in fact', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198443579767 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.171206225681 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0661478599222 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0466926070039 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.143968871595 0.0685040099705 210% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.132295719844 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0350194552529 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36913569465 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0194552529183 0.0309702414327 63% => OK
Particles: 0.00389105058366 0.00188951952338 206% => OK
Determiners: 0.0428015564202 0.0887237588012 48% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0233463035019 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155642023346 0.0139019557991 112% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1365.0 2387.08602151 57% => OK
No of words: 228.0 408.028673835 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98684210526 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.48200974243 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311403508772 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263157894737 0.251872472559 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162280701754 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0921052631579 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36913569465 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469298245614 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.6208237596 59.2087087015 70% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2857142857 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0948735647 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.5533526081 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 42.6015037594 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.01075268817 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284074452881 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147545888206 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120034604505 0.0752933317313 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55740127888 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.234558267677 0.151897553556 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167004521213 0.114077575197 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199742583062 0.0781384742642 256% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352535585655 0.336927656856 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0179393817193 0.067059652881 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221340569217 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935371998506 0.0618886996521 151% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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