Are parents the best teachers?

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Are parents the best teachers?

Of course they are. Parents are the best teacher as they are the first teachers. We learn how to live, how to speak and communicating skills from them. At the onset of birth, educating process starts and when we turn to an adult person, they help us with worthy experience about the real world.
Respecting parents is one of the indispensable assets at most of the religions. Moreover, this is an entrenched trend among different communities and there is no conflict about it. I think it is not only for who protected us or grown us, a part of that strong order, regards to parent’s educational role. Teachers play the most important role in someone’s life by what they say at class or how they behave; Instinctively we are submissive about our teacher even after graduation and it is no matter that how they behaved about us, bad or good. I mean appreciating teachers is one of our natural attitudes and we have created belong it.
There are some people who have not nice memories from their father our mother. One of the reason than can cause such opinion, according to my personal experience and observations, is unaware and illiterate parents. The first biological teachers should care about their behavior when their adolescent tend to be a rebellious and refuse to take their advice. Adolescents try to dictate right of autonomy to parents by any matter that is possible; In these cases, rigorous father or mother is a destructive agent against children spirit. Good teachers act friendly and there is no obligation on their attitude. If parents are to introduce a hotshot to society, should act as a mentor, not as a commander. Teenagers, on my opinion even adults, will accept wise words and guidance from an alien (friends) easier than someone who is member of their family. So the best teachers should be the best friends.
Morally, humans owe parents, thereby, they expect nice face and great behavior of them. The most committed patrons which we can have, are our parents definitely; So we do not stand bad and furious attitude from them. On other word, as school teachers keep themselves respectful, parents should consider implications of their current behavior, advice and social manners, about children. For instance, if my father dumps his mother or father because they are elderly people and protecting them is too arduous, I might dump them in future, in accordance with what I learnt before.
As summary, parents are the best teachers, if they want to do it. Were it not for moral traditions, there would be lots of people who would dumped their parents because of a series of bad experiences. A new-born human is innocent; he or she learn many things from the parents; Being the best teachers or the worst teachers depends on the teachers.

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Average: 9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 526, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... them is too arduous, I might dump them in future, in accordance with what I learnt befor...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...A new-born human is innocent; he or she learn many things from the parents; Being the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, for instance, i mean, i think, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85443037975 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68683041245 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4405418675 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70833333333 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329128156913 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108104099446 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141814925387 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20446406757 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821601183425 0.0645574589148 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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