No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that in today’s sophisticated world we live in, every person tries to find a new way to gain success in his life and ultimately make the best decision which guarantees his prosperity in the future. One of the controversial question which is often arise in this realm is whether a person must be open to new ideas and changed his mind or stick with his own opinion and never change it. Some people adhere to the idea that willing to hear other’s opinion is a key factor to become successful while others take an opposite point of view. I, personally, believe that facing new ideas and changing our decisions could lead us to be more successful in our lives. In what follows, my reasons supporting this idea would be delineated.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that now more than ever the world we live in is constantly changing. Thus, people must be open to new experiences and looking at things in a new way in order to gain success in their lives. If people limit themselves to what they knew in the past, they will lag behind modern life. For instance, technology has brought us a lot of comforts such as computers, smart phones, internet and many more. So, it is an undeniable fact that people should stay updated all time and change their views when they are exposed to new facts and circumstances. On the other hand, society as a whole has changed and most opinions that were not acceptable years ago are accepted now. And if a person keeps up with his old and obsolete ideas, he cannot make rational and true decision when he faces challenging situations.
The second rationale behind this opinion rooted in the fact that different people have variant points of view and being open-minded and accepting new ideas help people to look at their problems through a different perspective and consider more than one way to solve their problems and ultimately choose the best one. This skill would assist people to solve their problem more easily not only in their personal life, but also in their jobs or as a member of a group. As you know, no one has a perfect mind and everybody might make a mistake in his decision if he wants to make a decision individually. Therefore, it is an axiomatic fact that whole is bigger than each of its parts and people should be able to accept each other’s opinions in order to broaden their experiences and reach a promising future.
Another equally important point is that embracing others’ ideas could strengthen the bond between a person and other people especially his work team and helps to establish more friendly relationships within the group. In addition, person who is willing to listen other’s opinions even opposite ones, become more popular among his colleagues which leads to gain bigger opportunities in the future. For example, an open-minded person who is receptive to new ideas and popular among others might be chosen as a leader of the team or get a promotion in his job. By contrast, insisting in one’s opinion and being stubborn serves as the origin of conflicts among peoples. Although receiving new ideas is hard to people because they forced to get out of their comfort zone, it is necessary for having a long-lasting relationship within a group.
In short, all the aforementioned grounds lead us to draw a conclusion that being willing to consider new ideas have a pivotal impact on one’s success both in individual and social life. Being open-minded helps people to achieve success in their works by increasing their popularity among others and also assists them to make the best feasible decision in face of predicaments. According to importance of this skill, people should learn how to be open-minded and choose the best way when they face difficulties.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stion which is often arise in this realm is whether a person must be open to new ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a new way" with adverb for "new"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...o new experiences and looking at things in a new way in order to gain success in their lives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 13.8261648746 217% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 52.1666666667 173% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3162.0 1977.66487455 160% => OK
No of words: 659.0 407.700716846 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79817905918 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06665523852 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70389188705 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467374810319 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 990.0 618.680645161 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2655819664 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4583333333 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415553305818 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127525781536 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101254122046 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275833910893 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1043855391 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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