Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
Throughout the human life, people should have a plan to reach their desire with high success, but the progressing technology provides a complex situation for people living need an organized plan to cross this path. The youth, who have a specific age in their entire life, should have a particular ability in terms of the modern life is very complex to fulfill their demand. I explain my reason hereunder that why young people have the ability to organize.
First and foremost, by changing human’s lifestyle after industrialization, many young people confront a complicated situation in their life to find a job in terms of supplying their demands. In the pre-industrial age, many young of people were designated in their ancestor’s job and continuing its and pass on their children. On the other hand, in the modern life, the youth has ability plan to take job position in their future life, so recognizing with self-cognition to detect their ability in their passion to flourish that. For example, many students try to find their talents and pursuing it in the interesting field in universities; therefore, their geniuses are fostered appropriately to find a suitable career, but without any ability to discover their talents that they cannot trigger right plan for their future.
Another reason comes in my mind is that the accessible resource and money, nowadays, is very scarce, so that the youth are confronted with a crisis situation how they should deal with it. In the ordinary life, many people are corresponding themselves with the modern life. As consequently, since the beginning of life, many young must spend much of their incomes on additional expenses such as dispensable commodity. The young people have a moderate income should learn how to manage their budget and have the financial ability to have a peaceful life without any anxiety about their future. For instance, the youth having this ability try to save the section of their income monthly in order to purchase an essential stuff such as suitable accommodation, and high-quality automobile. As a result, organizing an affordable plan in life needs a proper ability in a young person to handle every difficulty conveniently.
All in all, the elaborated modern life creates a situation for young people because of having crucial age in their life should be cautious about the future life. Thus, young people not only distinguish their interest to foster them in respect of finding the best career but also should have an economic ability in order to manage their budget. Accordingly, they can ensure their life to reach a prosperous point.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2201.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11860465116 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83790403237 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481395348837 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8432069061 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5625 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411179059965 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161386317805 0.076458572812 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884482594501 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308859868224 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107543983287 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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