Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
There is no doubt that nowadays, having a plan for the future the crucial role in the people’ life. A controversial question arises in this issue how the young people organize their plans for their future in order with modern life is very complex. However, the young people who do not define any plan for their may have some problems in their future’s life. I subscribe this idea which for the modern need a programmed plan to get prosperous as soon as, and explain hereunder.
First and foremost, getting a job for earn suitable income and revenue is very strictly because of jobs in the modern’s life more difficult and complicated than the past times. Typically, in the contemporary, considerably demanding more knowledge and ability for getting a job or work is enhancing. The young people for this plan which is getting knowledge have gone to the universities or some companies to getting enough ability to do specific job that they can have high performance in every tasks. An empirical study in the Asia shows that the young people have more preparing and organizing for their task be more prosperous in every task than other who be without plan and organize.
Secondly, in the modern society, life is very complex and elaborated and in the everyone’s life can arise some problems for everyone abruptly or suddenly. Without any plans and programs not only evoke some distraction in their mind but also get them in the colossal predicament. The program allows them to predict and anticipate any problems may confront; Therefore, the young people manage the difficulties which will be, which cause prevent any anxiety and stress from their mind and help them be so much happier and thriller. With psychological standpoint, many young people have more plan and organize for their future. They be more confidential in their work and this act is paving the way for flourishing them and be more successful. On the other hand, without plan cause some problems for their mind and have lot of problem with their proximity people.
All in all, have plan and program for future not only useful for young people, every people should have plan to prevent some problems and have sufficient ability for doing every task for flourishing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
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Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y for doing every task for flourishing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68087463849 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460317460317 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6325057217 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.066666667 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4322291842 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171421031791 0.076458572812 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926783638077 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306863220087 0.150856017488 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624417496557 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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