Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Nowadays, developing in any areas of life is tangible with all people. The people who don't adapt themselves with this phenomena will find life complex day by day. Yong people who are in their growing ages, have plan to improve and get their dreams, so they are more in exposure of complexity of modern life. In my view, the ability to plan and organize is an essential parameter that young people should have it to prepare relax life themselves because of two important reasons.
The first reason is that it is essential to have planing ability to organize daily life in order to reach goals and dreams. In the modern life which is changing rapidly we should have the ability to find best route in any time. Today's life is a field of competition which needs wise an cleverness to organize decisions. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember that when I finished high school, my goal was to study at university and get major in chemical engineering. There were university entrance exam in my country and a lot of students had competition to get a course in governmental universities. So, I sketched a plan to study hard based on the books, software and etc which I had opportunity to use them. As a result of this plan I got a good grade and I found the opportunity of studying in a good university. This example demonstrate that we have to have a organized plan to reach our goals.
The second reason is that we need plans to adapt ourselves with new technologies to make our life easier. A lot of works such as banking, studying,.. in modern life are done with developed technologies. We need to know them to have a relax life. For example, I remember that when I started my work as a chemical engineer, there were no requirement about using softwares to find a job. But know a chemical engineer who don't have ability of working with softwares, hardly can find a proper job. SO, during recent years I planned a software learning sketch for myself to learn almost one software each year. Therefore, know I easily could find job because of my software knowledge which comes from my ability to plan an organize.
In some, though some people prefer to don't think about future and they don't have any plan for their goals, I strongly believe that in a modern time that we live having good plans is essential to win in competitions and to have relax and easy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...angible with all people. The people who dont adapt themselves with this phenomena wi...
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...e people who dont adapt themselves with this phenomena will find life complex day by...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...ple who are in their growing ages, have plan to improve and get their dreams, so the...
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...lves because of two important reasons. The first reason is that it is essential...
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Suggestion: find the best
...g rapidly we should have the ability to find best route in any time. Todays life is a fie...
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...a field of competition which needs wise an cleverness to organize decisions. My ow...
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...a good grade and I found the opportunity of studying in a good university. This e...
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...ying in a good university. This example demonstrate that we have to have a organized plan t...
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...xample demonstrate that we have to have a organized plan to reach our goals. T...
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...hnologies. We need to know them to have a relax life. For example, I remember that when...
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...ent years I planned a software learning sketch for myself to learn almost one software...
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...dge which comes from my ability to plan an organize. In some, though some people prefer ...
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Suggestion: relaxed
...tial to win in competitions and to have relax and easy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55477855478 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61363473947 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8684026205 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8181818182 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388650000247 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103200444473 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899355836372 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25441023268 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758151297801 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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