There is no doubt that planning plays a pivotal role in every successful person, especially in the modern era, and no one could deny this fact. However, there has always been a controversy among people whether following a disciplined plan is a critical factor of progressing or not. The vast majority of people are of the opinion that people are more stressed when they have to obey a plan because it limited their time. I, contrary to popular belief, content that a private plan is an essential part of not only for our purposes but also our lives. in the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples to explicate my vantage point.
One of the reasons coming to my mind at first is that there are an enormous amount of today's technologies are squandering our time every day. When you used to check the news every day, once you connect to the internet, there are a lot of notifications from other applications which may distract you from your main purpose. To avoid this action, we must be organized and limit the time surfing the internet. To shed light on this issue, take me as an example. Yesterday, when I was reading a piece of news about new methods of weather prediction on my Ipad, an Instagram message promptly appear on my screen; I tapped on this message and open Instagram. It takes me 2 hours to exit from this application because there was a variety of posts made by my following members which I really enjoyed watching them. This example shows how having a plan in using state of the art technologies may result in better use of time.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating my stance on this subject is that it is a must for all of us to be organized, as a result, we can be more concentrated on our goals. In essence, the more thorough you are in your plan, the closer you reach your aims. As a case in point, I remember 2 years ago, when my brother wants to apply to study aboard, he has a lot of stuff to do, like taking the TOEFL exam, Taking the GRE exam and submitting an article to a high ranked journal in order to enrich his resume. If he had not had an precise arrangement, he would have not succeed to be accepted by one of the universities which he wanted. Also, a study was conducted by a group of researchers at Oxford University on the sources of recent innovations. Its results show that 95 percent of people organizing their duties in a plan achieve their goals at the time they predicted. As we can see, having a neat arrangement of our works, led to gain a quantum leap.
to wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that nowadays planning is an inevitable part of everyone's life. However, there it was a story in nutshell. Actually, there are other reasons and examples elaborating on this idea which are not mentioned due to the shortage of time. Finally, it is suggested that government invest part of it's budget to establishing an organization to help people to be more disciplined and keep their ways on a regular schedule.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, so, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2510.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 552.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54710144928 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69515296531 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523550724638 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 814.5 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.08851515 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.130434783 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13562934603 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381588311499 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477111024092 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925613561672 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702341041188 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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