Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.

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Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.

It has long been a hot controversy among contemporary scientists that living in the past was more pleasant than today. As far as I am concerned, answering to this question is imperative as it deals with the main parameters of satisfaction of life. I believe, early generations were more satisfied because of the slow pace of life.
The first plain reason that I should mention is that older people did not have modern technology. The technology plays an important role in the way we live today. According to a research conducted by one of the most reputable universities in my country, modern people who did not use cell phones for a month told that they feel better about their life. On the other hand, after using Internet consistently by some students for a long time, researchers confirmed that using modern technology can bring us a deep sorrow. Another example from my own experience may shed some light to this point, I remember when I was in high school, I had to use Internet a lot for my homework. After finishing high school, I was somehow upset about the way of my life. However, new technology can help us to hasten do our jobs, it brings the sorrow as its side effect.
The second reason for my propensity is that new generation has to adapt and change very fast by every new adventure. In the past, mankind had a constant way of living from the birthday to the death. For example, each generation had the same pattern of living. This made people feel more stable and as the stability has a big effect on satisfaction of life, elderly citizens are more satisfied with their lives.
Last but not least, people were happier in the past compared to now, because they had more time to celebrate and having fun. For instance, my father told me about the number of the celebrations day which was higher than today. As the world is changing so quickly, people do not have enough time for having fun or talking to the family members. The hustle and bustle of cities do not leave any time for actions which we love.
To conclude, considering the above reasons, people are less happy with their lives. From my own observations, younger generations are seeking to reach to the calmness way of living in the past.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrations'' or 'celebration's'?
Suggestion: celebrations'; celebration's
... father told me about the number of the celebrations day which was higher than today. As the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6253164557 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56302827219 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539240506329 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.038801389 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.35 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26181613681 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728217093634 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081586327373 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154340347827 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715652105336 0.0645574589148 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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