TPO 31_ Independent--
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Comparing the life different from the past and nowadays, people are getting much more comfortable and less inconvinient contrast to the days before. however, even though the world's changing the ways we living, and also modify the viewpoints we seen, it does not represent our sense of happiness and satisfation.
To begin with, the technology changing brings us a whole new style of living, the electronic divices change the way of how we interact the world, without the invention of social application such as instagram, facebook, we could not share our live through the pictures we took and immediately sent on the cloud service, to share to the public. people who like to share their ideas to the public would benefited from the advanced of the divices, through the sharing, they may feel happy and get satisfation. however, people living in the past may convey their love and life through the union of their family and friends, which shows more direct enmotion that the electronic divices can not convey.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...convinient contrast to the days before. however, even though the worlds changing the wa...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... cloud service, to share to the public. people who like to share their ideas to the pu...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...o share their ideas to the public would benefited from the advanced of the divices, throu...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...hey may feel happy and get satisfation. however, people living in the past may convey t...
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Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the electronic divices can not convey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05325443787 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54868220068 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627218934911 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9377508684 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.8 100.406767564 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174141348155 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09219596638 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257885941175 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137996189865 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00205229829848 0.0645574589148 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 11.7677419355 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.